First MOC, building advice appreciated

adult content Bought a $80 lego lot from marketplace with tons of minifigs, black and grey parts. This is what I’ve been working on. I did have to visit PAB and get all the translucent elements you see for the pieces that were in my bulk buy were too worn even for a “dingy” build. Also added a cmf. I also picked up plates for the flooring and roof. I like the exposed studs flooring for now, I think it gives the scene a grungy feel in contrast to the more exclusive back room. I went into this...