Brick-built Rain - what do you think?

In addition to sunsets, rain is one of my favorite types of weather, so I've been trying out different ways of depicting it in Lego without using a super complex technique or rare piece. This version is made by using technic plates to put 1x2x5 trans clear bricks at an angle against a window. What do you think? Lore: Blacktron agent Raven has been assigned to maintain a lonely listening post on an unnamed outer rim bog world. In her dreams she receives strange visions through the incessant...